I honestly loved this game so much. The twist, the story, the voice acting; all of it was amazing. I'm excited to play the other game you've made as well. Thank you for working so hard and sharing this game with us!
If you ever need a female voice actor, let me know!
Loved it, as a 12 year old game dev, the fact you made it this when you were 16 is just a big motivation for me. keep up the good work, and i will keep up mine too. :)
This "full length" game could've had its play time cut to 1/3 if it wasn't for the lifeless hallways. Environmental design was also lifeless, cat food boxes everywhere, empty rooms and backwards facing trailers in the trailer park which were built on top of rocks? I'm not saying these things to be malicious, but with a little more life, fleshing out and engaging world this game would've been much more. The story, ambience and sound were absolutely amazing, but the environments and pointless filler hallways made me lose interest and have to struggle through to the end.
The plot was amazing, kept me guessing and on my toes. But to me, personally, it felt like a hallway simulator with a side quest of chasing a serial killer. Just a little more layout thought and love and i'd have 0 complaints at all. To me, walking through empty places shouldnt be added to make what couldve been a 20 minute game that long
I suppose so. I managed to make a 3 part series on this game, I cut out anything that was basically empty space. managed to get at least 40 minutes of content. But I tend to check out everything ahha
My emotions have been toyed with and my heart shattered. Incredible ending and plot twist, absolutely wild to me that you're only 16, like you're very, veeery good at stablishing an intriguing narrative, very excited to see what else you can come up with
Im gonna be posting a youtube playthrough here soon, but just wanted to say this game was phenomenal. The story and gameplay was amazing, and the twists were awesome.
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I honestly loved this game so much. The twist, the story, the voice acting; all of it was amazing. I'm excited to play the other game you've made as well. Thank you for working so hard and sharing this game with us!
If you ever need a female voice actor, let me know!
Here's my playthrough if you'd like to see:
Theses games make me explode (Respectfully)
Jordan always be dropping bangers
Truly what an amazing developer, every game this person has made has been amazing! Never stop!
here is a video from my Long-Play Channel, thanks!
hi, could you put the dialogues also in Spanish?
AMAZING GAME NEED MORE
Loved it, as a 12 year old game dev, the fact you made it this when you were 16 is just a big motivation for me. keep up the good work, and i will keep up mine too. :)
loved this so much, played on stream <3 we all loved it <3 from Italy
all 5 stages of grief
THIS GAME IS GOING TO BE A CLAAAASIC
The game aesthetics is great like all of your other games but I'm having perfomance issues with this one I'm getting 15-20 fps
I knew this was going to be good... Loved every second.
THIS WAS SO FAR THE BEST FREE HORROR GAME I'VE PLAYED ON THIS PLATFORM. THANK YOU JORDAN! <3
Extremely well-made story-driven horror game with terrifying sounds and graphics while always subverting expectations until the end! 10/10
CHECK OUT MY PLAYTHROUGH!
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i think im in love with you jordan
The final part. Thanks for a game well done :)
Beautiful horror game especially surprised to see CallMeKevin it in
This was amazing especially for 16 yrs old. HIT ME UP FOR A FUTURE VOICE ACTOR!!!
This is the final part of the series. The ending had me almost crying and questioning. The game was awesome, loved every second of it.
The second part, got really interesting, I enjoy watching the other youtubers as we notice a trend in how we are thinking.
This "full length" game could've had its play time cut to 1/3 if it wasn't for the lifeless hallways. Environmental design was also lifeless, cat food boxes everywhere, empty rooms and backwards facing trailers in the trailer park which were built on top of rocks? I'm not saying these things to be malicious, but with a little more life, fleshing out and engaging world this game would've been much more. The story, ambience and sound were absolutely amazing, but the environments and pointless filler hallways made me lose interest and have to struggle through to the end.
Some valid points. The plot kept me engaged tho.
The plot was amazing, kept me guessing and on my toes. But to me, personally, it felt like a hallway simulator with a side quest of chasing a serial killer. Just a little more layout thought and love and i'd have 0 complaints at all. To me, walking through empty places shouldnt be added to make what couldve been a 20 minute game that long
I suppose so. I managed to make a 3 part series on this game, I cut out anything that was basically empty space. managed to get at least 40 minutes of content. But I tend to check out everything ahha
This was by far one of the best horror games with a plot I have ever played well done! Part 1 of 3:
dx11. not dx11 (10.1)
Incredible work!!
Well, that was fun and twisted! :-P
Thanks Jordan, I'll be checking out some of your other stuff and very impressed you were 16 when you developed this one.
Part 3 Final Episode of my playthrough of The Final Pin. Absolutely amazing game!
This was a pretty suspense filled game, very well made!
Here's part 2 of the story! Still loving this game so much!
Here's part 2 of my playthrough of The Final Pin!
This game is absolutely amazing! I can't wait to play more!
My emotions have been toyed with and my heart shattered. Incredible ending and plot twist, absolutely wild to me that you're only 16, like you're very, veeery good at stablishing an intriguing narrative, very excited to see what else you can come up with
THIS GAME WAS FUCKING AMAZING THE STORYLINE HAD ME SO ATTACHED UP UNTIL THE VERY END!
Im gonna be posting a youtube playthrough here soon, but just wanted to say this game was phenomenal. The story and gameplay was amazing, and the twists were awesome.
this was a good game