Not too far in yet, but you've got me interested and it's obvious you put a lot of work into making it. Aesthetically, it's really well done.
My main complaints so far aren't too intense, but I do have a few:
1. If you're going to open a game up with a quote, it better be a damn good one. In the vast majority of cases where a visual work (game/film/ect.) opens with a quote it almost always comes across as tacky and leaves a bad immediate impression, especially if that quote is something you made up yourself (like this one appears to unfortunately be).
2a. Anyone saying "Oh, cool" would have been quite uncommon as it had only very recently entered into the counter-culture slang vernacular and hearing it said by any cop or detective would have been extremely unlikely.
2b. Besides that, saying "oh, cool" in any professional setting by a fresh hire torward any superior, especially upon first meeting them, would have been firmly looked down upon and viewed as disrespectful or give the impression that they were uneducated.
3. Nobody would have said "weird ass" in the 60's.
Incredibly impressive game! The story got so wild at the end and definitely did not expect what happened there. The characters were great and you got some really talented youtubers to VA them, made it so much better!
You have such talent for game creation, looking forward to whatever you make next :)
A TRUE MASTERPIECE. COULDN'T STOP CLAPPING MY HANDS AFTER EVERYTHING WAS OVER. GOOD BYE CALROS AND TONY. YOU WILL BE REMEMBERED FOREVER. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS BEAUTIFUL GAME.
WOW WOW WOWOWOWO! Fantastic job, jordan!! I have played broken through and this one is quite the improvement! You are getting so good! The story and dialogue in this game is so funny and very interesting! I LOVED playing this game through! 💜
absolutely amazing, incredible narrative and surprisingly good voice acting. I'd die for Carlos and Max. just finished streaming not long ago and eventually i'll have it posted on youtube (I'm still learning how to edit)
Definitely one of the most immersive itch.io games I've played so far and was pleasantly surprised by the end of it. Jordan, you did your thing with this one.
Genuinely amazing game! After playing broken through I was super excited to see what you would do next, and you didn't disappoint at all! Amazing execution, great pacing, and the absolute sense of dread during it all was fantastic! Well Done!
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Not too far in yet, but you've got me interested and it's obvious you put a lot of work into making it. Aesthetically, it's really well done.
My main complaints so far aren't too intense, but I do have a few:
1. If you're going to open a game up with a quote, it better be a damn good one. In the vast majority of cases where a visual work (game/film/ect.) opens with a quote it almost always comes across as tacky and leaves a bad immediate impression, especially if that quote is something you made up yourself (like this one appears to unfortunately be).
2a. Anyone saying "Oh, cool" would have been quite uncommon as it had only very recently entered into the counter-culture slang vernacular and hearing it said by any cop or detective would have been extremely unlikely.
2b. Besides that, saying "oh, cool" in any professional setting by a fresh hire torward any superior, especially upon first meeting them, would have been firmly looked down upon and viewed as disrespectful or give the impression that they were uneducated.
3. Nobody would have said "weird ass" in the 60's.
This game is so well done. I didn't expect it to be this long. The visuals and story are amazing. And I didn't expect that ending tbh ⊙ˍ⊙
Incredibly impressive game! The story got so wild at the end and definitely did not expect what happened there. The characters were great and you got some really talented youtubers to VA them, made it so much better!
You have such talent for game creation, looking forward to whatever you make next :)net hier aber sind sie schon der Johann Religion (Sekte) beigetreten!
damn that cool
BROKEN THROUGH is a good game, but this story is great. but i have to say.. this game takes 2 hours.... but is a great game, thank you.
THIS is definitely your best game by far, Jordi! Well done... Kinda bittersweet with the ending, though haha :D
Great game! Loved the music and the look, basically everything about the game! I was not expecting that ending at all. Great game!
I loved this game! It was amazing!!
Can I play your and put up a video of me playing your game on my youtube channel
Of course!
This game is just so wholesome! I really cannot wait for your new game :)
This Game's plotline is better than most Netflix series.
FR!
I WAS COMPLETELY WRONG ABOUT WHO I THOUGHT IT WAS! GREAT GAME IT HAD ME SCARED!
A TRUE MASTERPIECE. COULDN'T STOP CLAPPING MY HANDS AFTER EVERYTHING WAS OVER. GOOD BYE CALROS AND TONY. YOU WILL BE REMEMBERED FOREVER. THANK YOU FOR MAKING THIS BEAUTIFUL GAME.
i didn't expect that ending at all XD
can't believe this game is free
such an awesome game !!!!
WOW WOW WOWOWOWO! Fantastic job, jordan!! I have played broken through and this one is quite the improvement! You are getting so good! The story and dialogue in this game is so funny and very interesting! I LOVED playing this game through! 💜
This game, like every game this dev makes, is amazing
fun little mystery!
Amazing game, start to finish. Great job!
It's absolutely amazing that The Final Pin is going strong at #3 on popular! @JordiboiCL is an AMAZING young dev!
I am the voice of Bill and had a BLAST recording for this!
The Final Pin | Voice Actor Playthrough | Random Scary Games
absolutely amazing, incredible narrative and surprisingly good voice acting. I'd die for Carlos and Max. just finished streaming not long ago and eventually i'll have it posted on youtube (I'm still learning how to edit)
in the meantime, here is a short from the stream:
Episode 1 of three up for this game. Due to it being long, had to cut it into 3 videos. Loved the game and the story it presented.
AHHHH a masterpiece
Thank you JordiBoi for another banger of a game! I loved the experience even the cheese at the end.
Hello, this game is fabulous and very scary, I want you to subscribe to my channel, please help me, greetings friend!!
I'd like to apologise for putting worth £0, I didn't mean to put that, I'm trying the game out right now and holy shit its amazing, I'm just poor :/
Have a nice day my friend :D
Had a lot of fun with this, great job!
Definitely one of the most immersive itch.io games I've played so far and was pleasantly surprised by the end of it. Jordan, you did your thing with this one.
just best
so cool
Genuinely amazing game! After playing broken through I was super excited to see what you would do next, and you didn't disappoint at all! Amazing execution, great pacing, and the absolute sense of dread during it all was fantastic!
Well Done!
Skip to 1:34 I had just came back after a mini break and was explaining where I've been but this game is fire pretty long still worth the time!