This game is really amazing and i enjoyed every single part of it, amazing storyline and case solving. The only issue i had with is copyrighted songs when i uploaded to my yt channel. About the voice acting we can not expect much from an indie game, this for me was an amazing addition and hard work. Well done JordiBoi i love your games.
Out of all the games you've made, this is by far the worst. Development was rushed, and you can tell by the voice acting. I loved Broken Through and The Shopping List, but unfortunately this game really dropped the ball.
Some YouTube gamers who beat the game are far older than that (even parents) and still didn't get THE ENDING, which by the way IS PHENOMENAL. What a rollercoaster ride of an ending.
Plot-wise another great thing is the title chosen for the game. I love it.
There was one thing though about the plot that I didn't like, but I'm not gonna be the one to spoil anything.
I love these games that are comical in certain aspects (like the PS1 presentation or how some characters are portrayed) yet quite mature in the plot and vibe departments.
I played this while my friend watched, and WOW. Overall, such an amazing game, and the ending brought me to tears. I can't wait for you to come out with more games and content you're an amazing developer and this was an amazing experience. I loved the story and was very curious the whole time about everything. I would definitely play it again. I loved this game.
Really good game with an astonishing mood. It reminds me of my old PS1 and some games like ResidentEvil (the first). The main aesthetic is gorgeous. I really like the work on the background sounds. However I have some bugs especially when I am in the water with the corpse. I had some difficulty coming to the surface. Also I found the crowbar, but I cannot open the next door with it. Overall a really good experience. What is the engine under this development?
I thought this was going to be a jumpy scare type of game but I was glad it wasn't, as it might have ruined the atmosphere of this superb game. I really liked how it wasn't overly difficult to complete but just enough thought provoking and puzzle solving.
tu juego me fascino , fue muy interesante , tiene una historia increible y un final espectacular , me lleno de emociones tristeza enojo y alg ode amor , muchas de las emociones que tu protagonista tenia pronto probare mas de tus juegos <3 saludos desde buenos aires
i'm blown away! this was an incredible experience, and i enjoyed every moment of it. it spooked me, it made me emotional, and i had a wonderful time. the art style is so refreshing and the music was top tier. kudos!
Great game, sucks that it crashed on me when I tabbed out on Linux but it was karma because I said something about wanting to cheat the game
I was close to the end too
Does it really make a difference to set the frame rate to anything higher than 30? Were the higher frame rates tested? It's weird because if you set it to 144 and then try to go down, you will get values like 124
THE FINAL PIN: Un agente de policía pierde a su familia por su obsesión con el asesino del cuervo, lo que no sabe es que tan involucrada puede estar su familia en el asunto, juego de novela policiaca estilo retro con un argumento y trama bastante buenos, gracias por crear el juego, saludos a todos!!!
bro this is most definitely a verry good horror game the ending was soo unexpecting i don't know how you do this and how you make such good content but damm that has got to be the best game I've played in 2023.
Decent game, but, just like Shopping List, the pacing is terrible. The game is way too long for the amount of plot/content. It should be half the current length. In particular the side character flashbacks and long epilogue are completely unnecessary. You have a tendency in your games to over explain the story, which wastes time. If you gave them the necessary information, trust your audience to be smart enough to work out the plot without every single plot point being explained to them in detail.There also aren't any good scares in the game, so it's more of a thriller game than a horror game. Still, I liked the game overall.
THIS COMMENT INCLUDES SOME SMALLER SPOILERS FOR THE GAME!!!
Allow me to give you some of my thoughts, including constructive criticism that you might find handy later for your works!
The visuals were fantastic. Even though the game followed the “recent” (been going on for quite a while, I didn’t even realise) uprise in the older-style graphics, it still felt distinct from the bunch of others that have been floating around recently, and I cannot give one specific reason why. As it seems, the game managed to do just about everything at least a bit better in terms of looks. BUT, and quite a big one:
Lots of repeated assets right next to, or after eachother, like (I do understand the amount of work it takes to create for example a small house, but even then) the trailer park (iirc) scene, with like 7 repeated assets, both inside and outside with no difference (except for the weapon safe which was quite out of place) in interior in the 6 except for the crime scene was really unappealing
The story was fine, sometimes felt a bit unguided, but it still managed to come out well. The reason for that might be related to the following point though…
The more problematic part, gameplay:
The gameplay is the part that made this game way less enjoyable to me than it could’ve been. To summarize it, it was long, like long long. That wouldn’t be a problem usually, but in this case it felt like everything was dragged out for the sake of the game being long. Every action needing some charge/delay (except for a few, like doors), the roads and routes the players have to take being just a tad bit too long, and just really small things like these made me feel like the whole experience was a drag.
Some additional stuff:
I managed to get stuck in the first crime scene by just walking off the pavement
Berlin (the bartender, if I didn’t get his name right) wasn’t there in the ending scene (as far as I’ve noticed), which could’ve been a nice interaction (something like “Is THIS the party you were planning? COOL!” or similar)
Overall, if it wasn’t for the slow and dragged-out gameplay, this game could definitely be a strong 8/10 or 9/10, but for now, it sadly isn’t in my books.
Hope this helped with getting some insight, and looking forward to seeing more from you!
This game was amazing! I had such a fun time playing it, at times it felt like I was watching a movie, but some of the segments like driving the car made it feel more real. The sewers and the vent were terrifying honestly, just the ambience with minimal jumpscares was bone chilling. Sound design and music were perfect, and the story was so immersive and had a twist I didn't see coming! The pacing was smooth and I loved the characters, and the voice acting too. I can't belive this game is free, and that everything was made by one person! Bravo!!!
This is such an emotional experience. one of the most shocking games I've ever played. Horror games with great stories and characters like these always exceed my standards. It's so well made too, this developer never dissapoints!
Simply without words, the best indie horror game I have played so far. The atmosphere is fascinating and the music and sounds are masterpieces. The history is very good. I have loved the three games that this creator has made, I hope that he continues with these projects and if he surpasses his previous games, including this one, he will have a great future knowing that only he develops these wonderful games.
Just finished this game and the ending got me! It was a great game and I had so much fun playing it. Check it out and see if you had the same reaction as me!!
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This game is really amazing and i enjoyed every single part of it, amazing storyline and case solving. The only issue i had with is copyrighted songs when i uploaded to my yt channel. About the voice acting we can not expect much from an indie game, this for me was an amazing addition and hard work. Well done JordiBoi i love your games.
Out of all the games you've made, this is by far the worst. Development was rushed, and you can tell by the voice acting. I loved Broken Through and The Shopping List, but unfortunately this game really dropped the ball.
remember that it costs zero dollars man
alur cerita game ini keren banget dan mudah dipahami, suasana creepynya juga dapet! keren!
Story: 9/10, Creepy: 7/10, Graphic: 7/10
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Such an Amazing game, I didnt expect it to get so emotional but i loved every second, Just decided to split the video up into parts but great work 🙏
Thats the best game i have ever played
la historia engancha!
Gracias creador!
The final pin / buixu
WOW... this game!
10/10. Suspenseful, atmospheric, and full of dread. This was PERFECTLY done.
16 years old ?! I can't believe it.
Some YouTube gamers who beat the game are far older than that (even parents) and still didn't get THE ENDING, which by the way IS PHENOMENAL. What a rollercoaster ride of an ending.
Plot-wise another great thing is the title chosen for the game. I love it.
There was one thing though about the plot that I didn't like, but I'm not gonna be the one to spoil anything.
I love these games that are comical in certain aspects (like the PS1 presentation or how some characters are portrayed) yet quite mature in the plot and vibe departments.
Congratulations for such an interesting game.
esta bien bonito como la puto puzzle de la biblioteca como te odio hijo de puta te quiero <3
I played this while my friend watched, and WOW. Overall, such an amazing game, and the ending brought me to tears. I can't wait for you to come out with more games and content you're an amazing developer and this was an amazing experience. I loved the story and was very curious the whole time about everything. I would definitely play it again. I loved this game.
Really good game with an astonishing mood. It reminds me of my old PS1 and some games like ResidentEvil (the first). The main aesthetic is gorgeous. I really like the work on the background sounds. However I have some bugs especially when I am in the water with the corpse. I had some difficulty coming to the surface. Also I found the crowbar, but I cannot open the next door with it. Overall a really good experience. What is the engine under this development?
I thought this was going to be a jumpy scare type of game but I was glad it wasn't, as it might have ruined the atmosphere of this superb game. I really liked how it wasn't overly difficult to complete but just enough thought provoking and puzzle solving.
Many thanks for this :D
Amazing game really enjoyed it looking forward to play more of your games
tu juego me fascino , fue muy interesante , tiene una historia increible y un final espectacular , me lleno de emociones tristeza enojo y alg ode amor , muchas de las emociones que tu protagonista tenia pronto probare mas de tus juegos <3 saludos desde buenos aires
Omg! this game obviously go in my list to play this games in the night! I Dowloand the shopping list and This game! Make more! i love it
i'm blown away! this was an incredible experience, and i enjoyed every moment of it. it spooked me, it made me emotional, and i had a wonderful time. the art style is so refreshing and the music was top tier. kudos!
SUPER COOL GAME!
loved the atmosphere and the story, also scared me in some moments. Great game
Wow, 2 hours of high quality gameplay. Cinematics, game mechanics, etc. Great game
Great game, sucks that it crashed on me when I tabbed out on Linux but it was karma because I said something about wanting to cheat the game
I was close to the end too
Does it really make a difference to set the frame rate to anything higher than 30? Were the higher frame rates tested? It's weird because if you set it to 144 and then try to go down, you will get values like 124
I really enjoyed this game ! It was really good ! I liked the story and atmosphere ! I really liked the characters too ! bravo !
THE FINAL PIN: Un agente de policía pierde a su familia por su obsesión con el asesino del cuervo, lo que no sabe es que tan involucrada puede estar su familia en el asunto, juego de novela policiaca estilo retro con un argumento y trama bastante buenos, gracias por crear el juego, saludos a todos!!!
this game was sick
An interesting take. I enjoyed the noir elements. I hope you enjoy the video!
Really enjoyed this game very spooky :)
bro this is most definitely a verry good horror game the ending was soo unexpecting i don't know how you do this and how you make such good content but damm that has got to be the best game I've played in 2023.
Decent game, but, just like Shopping List, the pacing is terrible. The game is way too long for the amount of plot/content. It should be half the current length. In particular the side character flashbacks and long epilogue are completely unnecessary. You have a tendency in your games to over explain the story, which wastes time. If you gave them the necessary information, trust your audience to be smart enough to work out the plot without every single plot point being explained to them in detail.There also aren't any good scares in the game, so it's more of a thriller game than a horror game. Still, I liked the game overall.
I think I love this game. You did a great job and I had so much fun to play and the story too good
THIS COMMENT INCLUDES SOME SMALLER SPOILERS FOR THE GAME!!!
Allow me to give you some of my thoughts, including constructive criticism that you might find handy later for your works!
The visuals were fantastic. Even though the game followed the “recent” (been going on for quite a while, I didn’t even realise) uprise in the older-style graphics, it still felt distinct from the bunch of others that have been floating around recently, and I cannot give one specific reason why. As it seems, the game managed to do just about everything at least a bit better in terms of looks. BUT, and quite a big one: Lots of repeated assets right next to, or after eachother, like (I do understand the amount of work it takes to create for example a small house, but even then) the trailer park (iirc) scene, with like 7 repeated assets, both inside and outside with no difference (except for the weapon safe which was quite out of place) in interior in the 6 except for the crime scene was really unappealing
The story was fine, sometimes felt a bit unguided, but it still managed to come out well. The reason for that might be related to the following point though…
The more problematic part, gameplay:
The gameplay is the part that made this game way less enjoyable to me than it could’ve been. To summarize it, it was long, like long long. That wouldn’t be a problem usually, but in this case it felt like everything was dragged out for the sake of the game being long. Every action needing some charge/delay (except for a few, like doors), the roads and routes the players have to take being just a tad bit too long, and just really small things like these made me feel like the whole experience was a drag.
Some additional stuff: I managed to get stuck in the first crime scene by just walking off the pavement Berlin (the bartender, if I didn’t get his name right) wasn’t there in the ending scene (as far as I’ve noticed), which could’ve been a nice interaction (something like “Is THIS the party you were planning? COOL!” or similar)
Overall, if it wasn’t for the slow and dragged-out gameplay, this game could definitely be a strong 8/10 or 9/10, but for now, it sadly isn’t in my books. Hope this helped with getting some insight, and looking forward to seeing more from you!
Absolutely this! Overexplained and the stretched out gameplay mechanics felt like time wasters more than contributing anything to the game itself.
This game was amazing! I had such a fun time playing it, at times it felt like I was watching a movie, but some of the segments like driving the car made it feel more real. The sewers and the vent were terrifying honestly, just the ambience with minimal jumpscares was bone chilling. Sound design and music were perfect, and the story was so immersive and had a twist I didn't see coming! The pacing was smooth and I loved the characters, and the voice acting too. I can't belive this game is free, and that everything was made by one person! Bravo!!!
This is such an emotional experience. one of the most shocking games I've ever played. Horror games with great stories and characters like these always exceed my standards. It's so well made too, this developer never dissapoints!
Simply without words, the best indie horror game I have played so far. The atmosphere is fascinating and the music and sounds are masterpieces. The history is very good. I have loved the three games that this creator has made, I hope that he continues with these projects and if he surpasses his previous games, including this one, he will have a great future knowing that only he develops these wonderful games.
This game should cost money.
game was good had a few moments that it lost me but overall a good game thought id drop this here thank you for indie devs